The Pause ~ Promises of Someday

by Michelle K






Catherine is ...
He remembered a time when he'd have sought Devin's wisdom, eager to know the spark of a passing touch ... the magic of a stolen kiss. Devin would have opened the door for him ... stretched the boundaries of his world ... allowed him to believe, if only for a moment, that such wonders might be his.
But Devin had gone ... and with him, hope.
Until Catherine.
Her light, her possibility.
She opened the door, took his hand, and stepped through. With him. There were no words for such a dream. No words. She was ... everything. And ... more.
                                                                                                                             ... more  ... than a helper.








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9 comments:

Three Writers July 23, 2010 at 3:01 AM  

Welcome to Everything, Michelle! "She opened the door...took his hand...stepped through...with him..." What a perfect picture! Thank you!!! I'm smiling to see it! Nancy

Vicky July 23, 2010 at 8:29 AM  

"She opened the door, took his hand, and stepped through. With
him." This is so perfect, Mich! I am so happy you're here, sweetie.

Carole W July 23, 2010 at 9:56 AM  

This passage: eager to know the spark of a passing touch ... the magic of a stolen kiss ... sigh. I could just hear this conversation between them, had things gone a bit differently for Devin years ago. This is such a tender moment, Michelle, and you grace them with dignity and maturity. Lovely, indeed.

Carole

SandyX July 23, 2010 at 10:20 AM  

This is lovely, Michelle, and it reminds me of the balcony scene in this episode, where Vincent tells Catherine that Devin was the only one "irresponsible enough to dream dreams that included me." Now those dreams that include him are Catherine's.

Welcome to the group! I'm so glad that you're here with us.

Cyndi D July 23, 2010 at 11:40 AM  

You too!!! Reminding us of all the dreams lost to Vincent "Until Catherine." Darn it I need another tissue!.

Krista July 23, 2010 at 7:12 PM  

Welcome, Michelle! :)

This is just...lovely. You've captured the miracle of their love so perfectly---that their dreams encompass each other, that there are no limits. Fantastic job!

-Krista :)

OKGoode July 25, 2010 at 5:28 AM  

Wonderful image of the younger brother having out-paced the elder in the realm of love, Michelle! Such a perfect point, and so eloquently made! Now that we've got you, we're not letting you go!

Brit July 28, 2010 at 11:31 AM  

Such imagery Michelle! *SIGH* so wonderful! so beautiful!
"there are no words" how very Vincent. :)
Spectacular! Loved this.

Michelle K. August 1, 2010 at 4:47 PM  

Oh MY! I didn't even know I had comments here. Thanks so much to ALL of you ... to my "Everything..." girls for including me, and your sweet, encouraging words. I was so nervous to post my first contribution to the site, but it's so wonderful to be here among such talent.

Nancy, you are a darling for giving me your words and attention. You know how much you mean to me. I can honestly say that V and C opened the door for me, as well ... and let me to you!

Thank you, Brit - you are a wonderful support! What wonders do my eyes see now that I share the vision with such friends?

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