by Carole W
Catherine is ...
and the words were swept away, the flood of years between them, its waters threaded currents of mirth, of melancholy.
You left – before our urgencies outgrew the imagined raft, the midnight expedition, the measure of the frog’s leap; while still we journeyed on boyish knees and bare hands, in adventure oblivious to the scrape of stone; before first your eye, then your heart might fix, before first love stopped your breath; before leaving in a different way, wrongly guilty that you did and I might never know ...
But, Devin, I do know. She ... is.
... more than a helper.
Click HERE to return to Promises of Someday Project list - The Pause
15 comments:
Somehow the offer of mere words in praise of this ... You are such a Gift to all of us, Carole! Brava!
Nancy
Nancy, you always have the best words! Thank you for reading; thank you for liking. Thank you for all you give with your work.
Carole
Sigh... How do you do it? I hate you! :-D
And oh, how I hate you back! :-D
Thanks, dearest one. Evoking a sigh from you ... that feels great.
Carole
"... wrongly guilty that you did and I might never know ... " That is just so very Vincent. As always, beautiful Carole.
Thank you, Sandy! It's always scary, posting, and it matters that the words seem in character. Big hugs.
Carole
you all like to make me cry! Oh the lost years between them! How poetic you are. You left. It tears at me.
Oh Cyndi, thank you! If I made you tear up, it's only fair. I was a mess by the time I finished reading and listening to everyone's.
Carole
Carole, I love this. Where do you find these words? They're just so Vincent. And Devin too, come to that---the brothers separated, but finally reunited.
Great job, again and still. :)
-Krista
As always, Carole, you sweep me away, right along with the characters you write. So jealous...
You guys, you're so good to me. Thanks Krista and Laura. Your encouragement makes me feel as though I can and I'm so grateful to you both.
Carole
But, Devin, I do know. She ... is.
OH CAROLE! That's so VINCENT! he has paused again! I love it! you Ladies have me sighing so much, I fear I might swoon ;)
Such wonderful imagery.. his thoughts of Devin.. wow Carole WOW! :)
THANK YOU!
Brit, you're always so kind. Thank you! I did give Vincent another pause! I hadn't even noticed. He's just the master of the ellipsis, isn't he. At least he can't be accused of talking too fast.
There were so many missed years between Devin and Vincent. They need some time together, working on some tunnel project. That's when guys seem to talk the best, while they work together. Hmmm. :-)
I'm so glad you've enjoyed our submissions. These ladies are fantastic writers and I'm in awe of their talents. Thanks so much for reading.
Carole
Yes men do talk best when working together :)
YOU ARE WELCOME!
Wow, wow, WOW. This is just ... well, to steal Vincent's words, there are no words! The sweeping nature of this passage! I feel whisked up in the waves of memory. Your poetry is astounding. This is just beautiful!
Post a Comment
Comments are welcome. Just click inside the box to type.